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Lost in shadowed caves

Have you ever had a dream,
That you were all alone?
Have you lived with someone handsome,
With a heart like a cold stone?

Have you drowned in deep,cold rivers,
And been lost in shadowed caves?
Have you lived with too much fusion,
Till you drowned in ghostly waves?

The waves run down the sea shore,
Then up they come once more.
The tide turns and life alters..
Deep on that ocean floor

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You were so beautiful and silent,
Like a sword without its sheath.
I should have let you take me,
The way you took away my breath


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  1. Date: 11/16/2012 9:50:00 AM
    there is such beauty in what you write here, enjoyed …

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    Bee Avatar Kathy Bee Date: 11/16/2012 10:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am very happy that you enjoyed it,Harry.Thank you.Katherine

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 9:40:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Kate. Love, Carol

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    Bee Avatar Kathy Bee Date: 8/22/2012 10:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much,Carol.

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 4:28:00 PM
    Wow. Another fascinating verse! Always, Laura

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    Bee Avatar Kathy Bee Date: 8/22/2012 2:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you.I’m glad you enjoyed reading it. Alll the best,Kathryn

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 10:05:00 AM
    ‘…like a sword without its sheath,’ ‘…the way you took away my breath,’ marvelous phrasing. Strong emotion masterfully expressed. Best wishes, Keith

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    Bee Avatar Kathy Bee Date: 6/24/2012 10:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you,Keith.I was halfway through another poem when this arrived!All good wishes,Kate

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 9:41:00 AM
    nice write KATE

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    Bee Avatar Kathy Bee Date: 6/23/2012 9:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much,Richard

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 5:50:00 AM
    The exist this way…Peace and blessings! Welcome to the soup!

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    Bee Avatar Kathy Bee Date: 6/28/2012 2:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you,Steven

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 5:05:00 AM
    Kate, welcome to P-Soup. Hope you will write, read (a lot) and comments other poem. – Have fun with poetry. – You write good, and I will come back to read some more. – Wish you a lovely weekend and sending you love from Norway and me:Anne-Lise

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    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/23/2012 5:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are welcome to read and comments some of mine poem. We have not a warm summer yet, it is raining and windy….cold…I live the west coast and we have not so good sommer – always windy.

    Bee Avatar Kathy Bee Date: 6/23/2012 5:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks,Anne Lise.I just joined this morning.hope you are enjoying midsummer up there in Norway Kate

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 4:31:00 AM
    Who is talking to whom and why should I care?

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    Bee Avatar Kathy Bee Date: 6/23/2012 5:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Your comment is odd for a poet.. hope you are not feeling very down today,Kate

    Bee Avatar Kathy Bee Date: 6/23/2012 4:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Do you want me to put more information into the poem ? Whether anyone is able to care about anything is a combination of mood and life experiences. Thank you for being my first commenter since I joined this morning


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About Kate Thwaite

I love writing , conversation, art, wild flowers, music and air.And books
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